Today's class, we did a worksheet on essay writing.
When we did the ordering of a paragraph I got the second one wrong!!!
Because Rab gave us a practice, his expectation of our essay is going to increase!!! NOOOOOOOOOOO
Topic sentences must have a topic and controlling idea
Supporting sentences cannot go off topic and contradict or it would be a crappy paragraph!
The classroom was so hot that I got really sleepy......
I managed to live through the class but it is not good to make the room hot
And i got to know some peoples real characters......lol
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